Saturday, March 26, 2011

saturday haiku


saturday haiku, originally uploaded by angryparsnip.

dragons in the clouds
white rabbit lives in the moon
run run run away hide

amazed. . . parsnip
music. . . Cloud Age Symphony, Okino Shuntaro

13 comments:

  1. If we had that wonderful sky here I think it would make me want to write poetry again.

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  2. You're getting rather good at haikus, I've been trying to practise them but am rubbish. Spectacular clouds.

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  3. What an incredible sunset! Those clouds are simmering with energy. And I love your haiku. Joanna

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  4. Beautiful Haiku. Wonderful picture.

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  5. William...
    Thank You, I think the clouds looks like dragons.

    Weaver...
    The sky and clouds are the first thing you really notice about Arizona.

    Eryl...
    Somehow I can't believe that your rubbish at writing haiku. I have read your blog and your writing it fabulous.
    For me a long poem is quite out of my reach but putting 5 and 7 syllables together is something I can do.

    debra...
    The Arizona Sky is quite fabulous !

    Joanna...
    The clouds that evening were as you said simmering
    with energy. This is one of my most favorite photos I took this year.

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  6. Love the picture & your haiku!


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  7. What poems, Parsnip!
    Definitely dragonlike
    This is a haiku



    Loved the splendid clouds

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  8. Carole...
    Thank you and we crossed in cyber space.

    Social Frog...
    You will soon be writing your own haiku in Japan.

    Elizabeth...
    Thank you I am trying to understand the haiku better.
    I understand the the first two lines are the feeling/subject and the last is suppose to be a surprise.

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  9. All of Italian art hasn't anything to show more fair than your picture.

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  10. Pat...
    I am always amazed by the colors of the sunset skies here. And my camera never quite catches all the colors. This sky in real time had a lovely shade of a rosy lavender that didn't show up on the photo.

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  11. Amazing picture and love the haiku!

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